Progress - At last!

Now I've posted the first part of Legendary over at Storywrite!

Can be found here

I ended up with the title of

Legendary - Chapter 1: First Contact

Which I realize makes it sound like a science fiction story with fantasy themes, but then I did tag it appropriately with 'Romance' and 'Fantasy'. The first chapter doesn't really have any of those though, or at least no fantasy, but as the story goes on there will be plenty of both. Not high fantasy, you'll find no elves and goblins, but you'll see why the tag was chosen.

Anyway, felt like posting this here, before trying to edit the second chapter. I kept the first chapter at about 1,3k words, exactly two pages in my word document, and that's what the remainder of the chapters will be as well.

I'm sort of stuck in the story at the moment, but there are still at least four more chapters to post before I get to that part, so hopefully I've managed to move on by then. Either that, or managed to wrap it up at least, as it's possible to end it at its current stage. The nice thing about chaptered works is that you can always go back and add one. Just don't add "to be continued" or "the end" at the last chapter, and you're gold! XD 

Reviews - Infernus

These are some tidbits taken from reviews of my story Infernus. Not all of these are positive reviews, but I love these little bits, so thanks guys and gals of Storywrite XDD

(The ones that are not separated by a blank line belong in the same review)


"Very disturbing, but amazing as well."

"Gruesome details. A truly horrifying tale."
"Overall, a good, if disturbing, tale. "

"I loved this story a lot. The gruesome details and the twist in the ending."

"This is really quite gross. Sickening really, but I can't but help to like the end. Well done."

"This should be age-restricted."
"The content is sickening, frankly speaking. But you have imagination, I'll give u that. "

"Well written, you style is good, but I'm a little disturbed at the content in this story."

"Why is this even posted?"

"urhhh! my gosh1 you make my body trembling!! i don't know why!!!! but i am scare!!!"

"Oh wow. That was a really good story. I actually covered my eyes a few times to try to make myself stop reading."
"It was extremely grusome, and yes, afterwards, I did feel about ready to throw up. The horror factor was good. *shiver*"

"Beautiful and detailed descriptions."

"...I dont even know what to say here, very grusome."

"I could have lived without some of the graphics but thats what makes it your story!"


This is my favorite:
"urhhh! my gosh1 you make my body trembling!! i don't know why!!!! but i am scare!!!"

I AM SCARE!!!

 

Thanks all, you make it even funnier to write XD